tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21467594.post2350538833998379909..comments2023-10-17T00:41:08.737-07:00Comments on whadiwannablogfor?: Opinions neededsTeVeLeChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17227161406980348422noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21467594.post-76893134868172516772011-01-09T09:16:36.606-08:002011-01-09T09:16:36.606-08:00Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a c...Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a color sketch to see if I could focus the composition better. It still needs work, but how do you like this general idea?Steve LeCouilliardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15547257659315554253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21467594.post-1845889991591235232011-01-09T01:47:46.272-08:002011-01-09T01:47:46.272-08:00I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't w...I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't want to understate the ability of a scantily clad Marion to get people to actually pick up the thing in the first place. :)<br /><br />Perhaps if Marion and Mulch were repositioned slightly to make them both central to the image instead of <i>just </i>Marion.MarauderDeucenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21467594.post-75951515089956886412011-01-08T20:26:42.249-08:002011-01-08T20:26:42.249-08:00Hey, Steve!
I like the basic idea for the cover. ...Hey, Steve!<br /><br />I like the basic idea for the cover. The composition leads the viewer around the page, and lets us see all the characters.<br /><br />My only concern is that it seems a little more focused on Marion than Much. Is there some way you can make him the focal point of the page? Perhaps through colour? <br /><br />Just my two bits.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />TomTom P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09069967544093660226noreply@blogger.com