Saturday, January 08, 2011

Opinions needed

Here's another concept...

Hey guys! I'm working on the cover for book 3 because the Xeric people want to post a cover image ASAP. What do you think of this?



Tom P. said...

Hey, Steve!

I like the basic idea for the cover. The composition leads the viewer around the page, and lets us see all the characters.

My only concern is that it seems a little more focused on Marion than Much. Is there some way you can make him the focal point of the page? Perhaps through colour?

Just my two bits.


MarauderDeuce said...

I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't want to understate the ability of a scantily clad Marion to get people to actually pick up the thing in the first place. :)

Perhaps if Marion and Mulch were repositioned slightly to make them both central to the image instead of just Marion.

Steve LeCouilliard said...

Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a color sketch to see if I could focus the composition better. It still needs work, but how do you like this general idea?