I like the basic idea for the cover. The composition leads the viewer around the page, and lets us see all the characters.
My only concern is that it seems a little more focused on Marion than Much. Is there some way you can make him the focal point of the page? Perhaps through colour?
I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't want to understate the ability of a scantily clad Marion to get people to actually pick up the thing in the first place. :)
Perhaps if Marion and Mulch were repositioned slightly to make them both central to the image instead of just Marion.
Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a color sketch to see if I could focus the composition better. It still needs work, but how do you like this general idea?
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Hey, Steve!
I like the basic idea for the cover. The composition leads the viewer around the page, and lets us see all the characters.
My only concern is that it seems a little more focused on Marion than Much. Is there some way you can make him the focal point of the page? Perhaps through colour?
Just my two bits.
Cheers,
Tom
I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't want to understate the ability of a scantily clad Marion to get people to actually pick up the thing in the first place. :)
Perhaps if Marion and Mulch were repositioned slightly to make them both central to the image instead of just Marion.
Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a color sketch to see if I could focus the composition better. It still needs work, but how do you like this general idea?
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