Saturday, January 08, 2011

Opinions needed





Here's another concept...


Hey guys! I'm working on the cover for book 3 because the Xeric people want to post a cover image ASAP. What do you think of this?

Steve

3 comments:

Tom P. said...

Hey, Steve!

I like the basic idea for the cover. The composition leads the viewer around the page, and lets us see all the characters.

My only concern is that it seems a little more focused on Marion than Much. Is there some way you can make him the focal point of the page? Perhaps through colour?

Just my two bits.

Cheers,
Tom

MarauderDeuce said...

I sorta agree with Tom. That said you don't want to understate the ability of a scantily clad Marion to get people to actually pick up the thing in the first place. :)

Perhaps if Marion and Mulch were repositioned slightly to make them both central to the image instead of just Marion.

Steve LeCouilliard said...

Thanks for the feedback guys! I threw together a color sketch to see if I could focus the composition better. It still needs work, but how do you like this general idea?

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